[Writing] 《小红帽》

Second piece of writing! Wooh! I’m aware that the translations sound a little… off, but it’s really more about the Mandarin, isn’t it? 😉 It’s because I keep translating them afterwards and I’m being too literal, so I will try to improve that if it’s weird.

《小红帽》

我要尝试着告诉你们这段故事《小红帽》。(我想这有很多错误,很难写,这篇文章也很长!)

很久以前,有一个女孩。因为她戴着一顶红的帽子,所以她叫“小红帽”。

某天她得去拜访外婆,因为外婆病了。小红帽有一些菜要给她。小红帽妈妈说,“当心,小红帽。在树林有很多危险的野兽。你得走在树林的小路上,你明白吗?”

“我明白妈妈“,小红帽说。

小红帽启程了。天气很好。她看见很多鸟和松鼠。小红帽看见一些很漂亮的花。花不在小路上,可是小红帽想要采花,给外婆。小红帽采了一些花。突然她看见一只狼。

“你在树林做什么?”他说。

“我在给我外婆采花。”小红帽说。“他病了。”

”你叫什么名字?“狼问。

”我叫小红帽。“

”我也想知道你外婆的身体是不是舒服一些了。她住在哪儿?“

”在河边,“小红帽说。

”好!我跑着去,你走着去。我想,我会比你到得快!“

”太好了!“小红帽说。

”再见,“狼说。

狼跑到了外婆的家。他敲了敲门。

”是谁?“外婆问。

”是我,小红帽,“狼说。

”请进,“外婆说。

狼进去,他马上吃光了外婆!

狼在床上躺下,等着小红帽。

小红帽来到了外婆的家。她敲了敲门。

”是谁?“狼说。

”外婆,是我,是小红帽!“

”请进!“狼说。

小红帽进去坐了下来。她看了狼一眼。

”外婆,“小红帽说,”你的耳朵很大!“

狼说,”因为我的耳朵很大,所以我可以更清楚地听到你。“

”外婆,你的眼睛很大!“

”因为我的眼睛很大,所以我可以更清楚地看见你。“

”外婆,你的牙齿很大!“小红帽说。

狼微笑了。”因为我的牙齿很大,所以我可以轻易地吃掉你!“

狼从床上跳下来,马上吃光了小红帽!

外婆的家外面,樵夫听见了小红帽的惊叫。他进去,用他的夫切开了狼的肚子。小红帽和她外婆掉了出来!樵夫杀死了狼。小红帽和外婆很安全,很高兴。(723字)

Little Red Riding Hood.

I want to try and tell you this story about Little Red Riding Hood. (I think there are a lot of mistakes; it was very difficult to write, and it’s also very long!)

Once upon a time, there was a little girl. Because she wore a red hood, she was called ‘Little Red Riding Hood.’

One day, she had to go and visit her grandmother, because her grandmother was sick. Little Red Riding Hood had some food she wanted to give to her grandmother. Little Red Riding Hood’s mother said, “Be careful, Little Red Riding Hood. In the forest, there are lots of dangerous animals. You must stay on the forest path, you understand?”

“I understand, mother,” Little Red Riding Hood said.

Little Red Riding Hood set off. The weather was good. She saw lots of birds and squirrels. Little Red Riding Hood saw some very pretty flowers. The flowers weren’t on the path, but Little Red Riding Hood wanted to pick some to give to her grandmother. Little Red Riding Hood picked some of the flowers. Suddenly she saw a wolf.

“What are you doing in the forest?” he said.

“I’m picking flowers to give to my grandmother,” Little Red Riding Hood said. “She’s sick.”

“What’s your name?” the wolf asked.

“I’m called Little Red Riding Hood.”

“I want to know if your grandmother is feeling better too. Where does she live?”

“Near the river,” Little Red Riding Hood said.

“Good! I’ll run there, you walk. I think I can get there faster than you can!”

“Great!” Little Red Riding Hood said.

“Goodbye,” said the wolf.

The wolf ran to grandmother’s house. He knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” grandmother asked.

“It’s me, Little Red Riding Hood,” the wolf said.

“Come in!” said grandmother.

The wolf went in, and immediately ate up the grandmother!

The wolf lay down in the bed and waited for Little Red Riding Hood.

Little Red Riding Hood arrived at her grandmother’s house. She knocked on the door.

“Who is it?” said the wolf.

“Grandmother, it’s me, it’s Little Red Riding Hood!”

“Come in!” said the wolf.

Little Red Riding Hood went in and sat down. She looked at the wolf.

“Grandmother,” Little Red Riding Hood said, “Your ears are very big!”

The wolf said, “Because my ears are very big, I can hear you more clearly.”

“Grandmother, your eyes are very big!”

“Because my eyes are very big, I can see you more clearly.”

“Grandmother, your teeth are very big!” Little Red Riding Hood said.

The wolf smiled. “Because my teeth are very big, I can eat you more easily!”

The wolf jumped out of bed and immediately ate Little Red Riding Hood up!

Outside of the grandmother’s house, a woodcutter heard Little Red Riding Hood’s screams. He went inside and used his axe to cut the wolf’s stomach open. Little Red Riding Hood and her grandmother fell out! The woodcutter killed the wolf. Little Red Riding Hood and her grandmother were very safe and very happy.

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